deviant art

Deviant Login Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download Image
JPG, 2362×1240
more ▶

More from *AngelCrusher

Featured in Groups:

Details

August 8, 2012
1.4 MB
2362×1240
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 6
Favourites: 12 [who?]

Views: 767 (0 today)
Downloads: 33 (0 today)
[x]
:iconangelcrusher:
This is a commission character mentor for :iconkeithrchapman: of his character Chai Overwinning.



I touched briefly on the what could improve elements of the drawing as well as the pose, while also suggesting ideas for the design, looking upon themes as well as getting some of the character's background and personality in it.

More Lessons in my gallery.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconbug-off:
*Bug-Off Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Those are some interesting choices.
Reply
:iconangelcrusher:
*AngelCrusher Aug 10, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Just somethings to think about.
Reply
:iconkeithrchapman:
~keithrchapman Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that you have made some great suggestions to clarify and make the design more iconic. Thank you.
Reply
:iconangelcrusher:
*AngelCrusher Aug 9, 2012  Professional Filmographer
No problem, I am glad there is some advice here that can be useful. :)
Reply
:iconbackerman:
nice but i liker her bigger... bigger can be sexy ya know...
Reply
:iconangelcrusher:
*AngelCrusher Aug 9, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Oh no doubt. Like I said I changed it for my own style and tastes. My main point is the slim the waist more than anything. She can stay big or muscular but I think needs a smaller, more visible waist/abdomen area because she is a dancer, and spinning her hula hoop is here trademark move. Visually it would be better to have a smaller waist to see that action.
Reply
Add a Comment: