This is a commission character mentor for of his character Chai Overwinning.
I touched briefly on the what could improve elements of the drawing as well as the pose, while also suggesting ideas for the design, looking upon themes as well as getting some of the character's background and personality in it.
Oh no doubt. Like I said I changed it for my own style and tastes. My main point is the slim the waist more than anything. She can stay big or muscular but I think needs a smaller, more visible waist/abdomen area because she is a dancer, and spinning her hula hoop is here trademark move. Visually it would be better to have a smaller waist to see that action.