Bo Character Mentor Commission

Commission for
of his character Bo


I was asked to try redesigning the character, using a detailed backstory and colour indications, this is my thought process and what I did. There are infinite ways you can approach a redesign, this was mine during this one session. I like the end result, and at the end of the day if the character at the end can still stand on it's own merit in design, then something has worked. Otherwise, hopefully during the whole process within the notes, there is some information that can be taken and used for the future that may help with your own redesign.


After nearly 2,000 words, it is quite a read. I didn't realize I typed so much, and probably haven't all in one go since a made rush to make an essay deadline the night before, but even if everyone doesn't read it all, as long as the one person it's meant for get's something out of it, then it's all worth it.

Hope you enjoy.